Tuesday, January 29, 2013

In the Time of the Butterflies journals

Journal #1:
Look at the photos in class. Try to observe the sensory details in the picture and capture them for a reader who is not able to look at the picture. Then create a micro-story about the photo. Imagine what people live there. What might be happening inside? Outside? This should just be a glimpse into this world. Each entry should be about 250 words.  Try to think about vivid diction to convey sensory details.

Journal #2:
Think of an object that has some significance for you. It can be something you have saved over the years, a photograph, a Chinese fortune you got when you went to a birthday dinner with your favorite uncle or anything that has a story to tell.  Then, write the significance of that object in the voice of the object (yes, a persona poem! Woohoo!). In this poem, use specific diction to relay a tone. What story would that object tell? More importantly, what would this story reveal about you and your memories?
Be haunted and obsessed with word choice as you revise. Don't necessarily choose the first word that comes to mind (especially if that word is stuff or thing).

Journal #3
What is your definition of courage? Would you consider yourself a courageous person? Under what circumstances would you act on this courage. Be specific!

Journal #4:
How do the Mirabel sisters become heroes? Do you consider each sister equally heroic? In a double-entry journal, select one quote (not from quiz) for two of the sisters and analyze what this evidence illustrates about her heroism (or lack thereof). Evidence should be carefully selected and analysis should be complex and nuanced.


Monday, January 28, 2013

Welcome to Second Semester!

Can you believe it? I can't! Our work for this week wraps up first semester, sets some goals for second and then leaps into third quarter. I am so excited to have Mrs. Guimond, a student teacher from University of Southern Maine, with us for the spring semester. You can read her introduction letter here: Mrs. Guimond's introduction letter

 See below for specific assignments this week:

Monday: Make sure I have checked off your goal sheet for second semester and you have saved it somewhere you can find. Here is the goal sheet:second semester goal sheet
Your BIG work this week is to complete at least 30 minutes worth of interviews AND transcribe them. I'll check both the audio file and the transcription on block day.
Tuesday: Interview and transcription due on block day
Wednesday: Finish webquest Due Monday.
Find the link for the webquest:http://www.zunal.com/process.php?w=172951
Complete worksheet for webquest and submit to work space when completed: Butterflies webquest

Monday, January 14, 2013

Homework for week of 1/14

Your work this week is twofold:

1. To revise your essay when you get feedback and turn in by Friday, 1/18.
2. To prepare for the midterm.

This is fairly straight-forward. Please make sure you leave enough time for someone to review your portfolio in a timely manner. Unless I hear from you, I would like your outside reader to be a parent or relative. Let me know if this is an issue by this Friday, 1/18. See details for midterm below.

Midterm details

Your midterm will consist of two separate assessments:
1. An in-class essay which asks you to respond to the following question:
What does it mean to be a young American?
Using  Into the Wild, The Catcher in the Rye and one other example of your own choosing, you will answer this question fully and specifically. We shall use the rubric from the beginning of the year to assess you:
You may outline and bring notes to the exam, but the actual essay will be written on demand. This will be worth 30% of your midterm grade.
2. A portfolio which asks you to reflect upon the work you have done this semester as a reader, writer and thinker. This will be worth 70% of your midterm grade.

Here are the documents which will help you with this task:
Overview and instructions
Checklist of Skills
Assessment Sheet
Other reader letter

Monday, January 7, 2013

Homework for week of 1/7

Monday: Finish rough draft. 750-900 words. See "essay scaffolds" for reminders about conclusions. Prepare for Round Two of Poetry Out Loud.
Tuesday: Prepare for Round Two of Poetry Out Loud.
Block day: Prepare for Round Two of Poetry Out Loud.
Friday: If rough drafts are not returned yet, none.

Wednesday, January 2, 2013

Homework for week of 1/2

Thursday: Complete introduction for Into the Wild essay for Friday. Complete rough draft is due on Tuesday, 1/8.
Here is the prompt:
What flaw(s) in Chris McCandless or society contribute to his tragedy?

In this paper you will come up with an interesting claim and argue your point, using direct evidence from the text. The best papers will not only support its claim, but also address the opposition.

Length: 750-900 words.
This essay should be thesis driven and engage the reader with a compelling, complex voice. It should also include direct citation from the novel in each body paragraph.

Friday: Complete body paragraphs, including evidence: 650 words. Due Monday. Begin to memorize second poem for Poetry Out Loud. Memorization should be complete by Thursday, 1/10.

Friday, December 21, 2012

Biography research project

Hi all,
As you know, we are beginning our biography research project. I am pasting the overview and timeline here. I would suggest starting interviews now! Remember to record your conversations.In addition, I'll post important document here as well at the top of the post.

Guidelines and suggestions for Interview Questions

MLA Resources

Mentor texts:
New Yorker profile of Taylor Swift
New Yorker profile of Manny Ramirez
Sports Illustrated profile of LeBron James
Guimond mentor text  


Overview

I know you have felt a certain void in your life this year and have wondered what it could be. Rest assured, the answer is at hand: a meaty research project to get you ready for the rigor of next year’s standards. I believe this project will be fun and engaging if, like Einstein, you become passionately curious in the investigation of the life you have chosen to know more about. That curiosity will be the foundation and you will use a variety of research skills to collect the data needed for the project. Your goal is to create a rich and complex narrative about your subject. There are many ways to do this and we’ll discuss strategies for success as we move through this project. This work will accomplish a few objectives taken from the Common Core Standards, which establishes skills necessary to be college and career ready:

1.  Gather relevant information from multiple authoritative print and digital sources; assess the strengths and limitations of each source; integrate information into the text selectively to maintain the flow of ideas, avoiding plagiarism and overreliance on any one source and following a standard format for citation.

2. Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to create a coherent whole and build toward a particular tone and outcome.

3. Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.

4. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.


Length:                                            12-15 typed pages, exclusive of cover and bibliography. These are minimums and maximums. The length in words is approximately 4800-7500. (use a font and line spacing which allows 400 words/page).

Subject:                                           May be living or recently deceased, may be any age, must be susceptible to a variety of kinds of research, must agree to be the subject (authorized).

Research:                                         Almost entirely primary, i.e. interviews, letters, oral histories. Some secondary research is acceptable when applicable, especially newspaper and magazine articles about the time period. Photos, clippings, etc. are encouraged. It is expected that every biography will have an extensive appendix, including transcripts (or notes) of interviews, letters, photos not included in the text, etc.

Sources:                                          Total of five sources are needed. Minimum of three people, including primary subject. At least two secondary source is recommended.

Initial Concerns:                            Family, extended family, education, town or city, religion/philosophy, career experiences, leisure activities, achievements, growth, changes, and challenges

Theme of a Life:                            Those conclusions, inductively ascertained, that give unity to the biography.

Description and Anecdote:            All should serve to reveal character. For a good guide to biographical profiles, check any recent edition of The New Yorker, which consistently presents the type of writing that I'd like you to emulate.


TIMELINE:
            DATE                                          TASK
            Monday, December 10                Selected your subject and received permission.
            Monday, December 17                Drafted a set of questions for primary source
            Friday, January 4                         Sent letters/emails of inquiry to secondary sources
            Block day, January 30/31             Conducted at least two interviews (audio recordings and transcript
            Friday, February 8                       Completed interviews (audio recordings and transcripts)
            Friday, February 22                     Researched newspapers and other sources; took notes
            Wed/Thurs March 6/7                  Formulated general “themes” of life; written at least one page of ideas
            Friday, March 15                         Researched newspapers and other sources; took notes                       

           Tuesday, April 23                          Written outline and two pages typed of draft                        
           Tuesday, April 29                          Rough draft due
           Friday, May 10                       Final draft due
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            Note: The key to success is staying on top of the timeline, asking for help when you need it and being willing to put in the time it takes to finish with a final product of which you can be proud!